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Sunday, December 2, 2012

In the midst of the Florence novel, stuck, I chose

to move my story (for the moment) into a new tense.  It was the only way for me to see the story new, to get the characters moving more quickly, to take a landscape and give it shape and meaning, to accelerate the plot.

Here, then, is where I have been since 5 AM, along the great wall of Fort Belvedere.  Four new paragraphs for the Florence novel, a book that I had left untouched for weeks.

We move ahead, in stolen time.

3 comments:

  1. Very happy you were able to steal the time and be there for the morning : ) This wall looks like a beautiful spot.

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  2. Thank you, Beth, for writing, for enlightening, for encouraging. xo

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  3. I'm so glad you found your way forward.

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