tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3017619759232312084.post4303538052560999709..comments2023-10-29T01:23:25.535-07:00Comments on Beth Kephart Books: W.I.P. (black cow by fence)Beth Kepharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14236487532413398431noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3017619759232312084.post-53276014855913759142011-01-29T10:06:26.099-08:002011-01-29T10:06:26.099-08:00Sarah Allen, you are right! Definitely too many co...Sarah Allen, you are right! Definitely too many corns there. I had just finished writing those sentences (they occur toward the end of the second third of a book I'm now writing) and decided to post them before they'd settled. But look! <br /><br />And The WooWoo Guru — yes, my photography. Really, it was the picture of the cow that I wanted to post, and so I wrote word to go with it. In the odd way that I assemble fiction and life.<br /><br />Hello, Miss Anna!<br /><br />(thanks to you all)Beth Kepharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14236487532413398431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3017619759232312084.post-69539505294446378622011-01-29T09:44:18.580-08:002011-01-29T09:44:18.580-08:00Wow, gorgeous! You have absolutely beautiful sente...Wow, gorgeous! You have absolutely beautiful sentences. (Not to be presumptuously editorial or anything, but the double "corn" in the last sentence feels a bit repetitive to me. Don't get me wrong, just trying to help, and I ADORE the flow of this paragraph. I have this thing where when I'm at a book store I pick up random books and read the first paragraph. If this was the first paragraph of a book I picked up, I would buy it. I'm not just saying that either.)Sarah Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01185278849400551014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3017619759232312084.post-88214528584596120422011-01-29T09:29:54.957-08:002011-01-29T09:29:54.957-08:00Gorgeous!
XO
A.Gorgeous!<br /><br />XO<br /><br />A.Anna Leflerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06968276973881720329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3017619759232312084.post-55743027227333601882011-01-29T09:29:06.233-08:002011-01-29T09:29:06.233-08:00I love this, Beth. Is this your photography as we...I love this, Beth. Is this your photography as well?The WooWoo Guruhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07647904158017590558noreply@blogger.com