Forgiveness: An Excerpt
Monday, January 26, 2009
Now Katherine stands at the window of the bedroom she and her twin once shared, watching a gull on the sill. It’s as if the bird has gotten lost all these miles from the ocean, all this distance from the color blue. Philadelphia is a steam swell, an ash pit, a scorcher. It is no place for a gull, not this September. But there the gull is, clinging to the sill beyond the window of Katherine’s room, casting a shadow on the pillow where Anna once burrowed her head. Katherine won’t turn to see what is inevitably there—absence and shadow, condemnation.
— Forgiveness, a novel-in-progress
10 comments:
How many times can I say "beautiful" or "wow"? But in all honesty, it is both plus more.
Oh boy !
Love it!
And you are right. Saying I like sleeping more than reading was just for dramatic effect. They are neck and neck though!
Thank you, you three.
And Lenore: I knew it! I just knew it!
Lovely, effective paragraph. Would this wip also be a YA, or adult fiction? Enjoyed browsing here.
Ohh. Well, that certainly inspires my curiousity about this twin...
You have piqued my interest, big time! I love the last sentence!
Joanne, Oh you ask the best question. I've written my novels to be read by any age, always. In this case, Katherine is 18. Her journey is universal. Thank you for stopping by.
Cuileann—and you have impeccable taste!
Vivian, you are a doll. Thank you.
I guess it's okay that you are not posting today because I've got, A Slant of Sun. Mmm hmmm :)
But I still miss you. Tuesday cheer.
Just beautiful.
XO
Anna
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