From a novel in progress
Saturday, May 23, 2009
Alone in the house, before Vin had moved in, Sophie had found the evidence of earlier owners in the attic, under the sink, on shelves—drawings left behind by children, marbles trapped beneath the radiator cover, a single sweater in the closet, a collection of dried lady bugs, laid out like counting beads, upon the guest-room sill. She had studied the scratches on the floor and imagined the traffic of past lives, had acclimated herself to the idea of spirits and specters, phantasmagoria. She understood, better than she’d ever let on, obsession.
8 comments:
Oooh. I see the tag adult novel in progress, very exciting!
Way to go--keep at it.
I love when you post these snippets. I'm amazed at how quickly you can draw us into a character's head. It's just wonderful!
Ditto Solvang Sherrie.
(Looking forward to learning more about this novel.)
That last word surprised me, and draws me along. So too all of the evidence of the ordinary. (Perfect photo.)
That's a rather haunting picture, and makes me want to know so much more about Sophie. You're definitely teasing us with all these lovely snippets of story!
Oh, how pretty. What vivid imagery you can portray -- it's mindblowing.
I agree with the other posters: very striking imagery in that piece.
Beth Fehlbaum, author
Courage in Patience
http://courageinpatience.blogspot.com
Ch. 1 is online!
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