Novel in Progress/An Excerpt
Monday, May 25, 2009
It’s been a few years since they let the patients go—herded the inmates away in buses; slipped the loonies down the loop in cars; did not see the only escapee who shuffled straight to the river, crab walked the bogged banks, and paddled deep into the channel. So that she wasn’t found until three days later—a turtle egg in the nest of her hair, a chewed strip of rubber on her wrist. A child made the discovery. He’d been playing. He had thought at first that she was Galatea, the milk-white one in his book of myths. No one would believe him when he came shouting, spinning home—mud to his elbows, shoes undone.
“You leave your imagination out of this,” his mother said.
“I’m swearing,” he told his mother, crossing his heart.
8 comments:
Attention grabbing selection...what curious imagery...turtle nest in her hair...it creates a water soaked feeling. I hope to read more. <3
Ooooo. This is so intriguing. Little children can be very perceptive. Will Greek myths come into play here?
I like the mother-child interaction. I like that the myth protects the child from realizing how gruesome his discovery was.
You've got me, Beth.
Wonderful passage.
Is it wrong of me to really enjoy a turtle egg in the nest of her hair? Does that make me twisted? (don't answer that, k?)
oh, chilling. And I love the picture that accompanies the excerpt.
Omigosh. Deliciously cold and troubling...
More, please...
;^) A.
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