Novel in Progress/An Excerpt (2)

Friday, July 3, 2009

The house is a storybook house. A huff and a puff and we’ll blow it down house. The roof is soft and tumbled. The bushes grow tall past the sills. Evergreens lean in from high above the cracked slate path, torpedoing pinecones to the ground. The floor slats are slants and the furniture slides, clawing away at the varnish. Big sheets of snaggled paint have split from Sophie’s bedroom wall and, like glaciers, crashed.

But there is a window—one—that is not tumbled, that is whole. Sophie waits until her mother leaves for work before pulling down the mid-air stairs and climbing into the pink scratch of the attic. Through the window at the far end of the room falls an oblique square of sun. Toward that oblique Sophie makes her way (careful on the cross beams, careful with the splinters, careful not to fall into the quilty insulation—that’s what the pink is, insulation), then sits watching the world beyond, the house across the street, the sloppy dog, the scramble of legs and tail that is the dog. The dog rumbles and slides, keeping guard over his house. He runs the grass alley between the fence and the porch and scurries a squirrel into a tree. He barks at the white car with the pistol muffler that goes roaring past—down the narrow asphalt, gone.

The dog is preamble; he waits.

6 comments:

Ed Goldberg said...

I want more, more, more!!!! Did I miss excerpt 1?
Have a wonderful 4th of July weekend, all.

Priya said...

I love all the descriptions: the house, the dog, the attic...

Sherry said...

What you do with words, Beth.

Anonymous said...

I'm not reading the excerpt because I want to read the finished book completely from beginning to end for the first time. Keep on!

Em said...

I always get excited when you give us a glimpse into what you're working on next! so many wonderful words to look forward to! :)

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