Scene from a novel-in-progress
Friday, July 24, 2009
The flames exposed the high cliff of a brick facade, but only for seconds at a time, and only incompletely. It was like a film plotting through its final sprockets, running out of light, and then the flames would leap again and Sophie could see the unsprung curl of a spiraling stair, or the steel curvature of a balcony wall, or the imploded wicker of a roof, the tentacled bones of old ivy. The bonfire had been set high up, in the building itself, and like a wild, unkempt song it kept changing tune and direction.
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The "tentacled bones of old ivory" is a great image. Love the way you paint with your words. Looking forward to more scenes!
This is lovely. I love "It was like a film plotting through its final sprockets, running out of light, and then the flames would leap again..."
Who's Sophie? Is she a new brain child?
Beth, you also have an award waiting for you :)
Sophie, my dear Georgie K., is about six months old in my head. A character in a novel I am writing....
Thank you, Priya, ER, and SM...
And slowly very slowly, I keep going.
I will be waiting for this book VERY eagerly. It's absolutely fabulous.
Well...I can't beat Priya's Evil Pink Unicorn Award, but I will wait, patiently as I can, for the rest of this story to unfurl.
I love when you give us these little tastes =)
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