Four lines stolen from a poem
Tuesday, September 27, 2011
My friend (I call her Soup) is one fine writer. She taught me tricks a few years ago. Okay, so it was a few decades ago now, and she was my neighbor, and her real name is Andree, and if you want to know how much I just plain like this lady, then you can read all about it in a little book I wrote, a memoir called Into the Tangle of Friendship.
But that is beside the point right now, because Soup grew up and I moved away, and Soup's children—they grew up, too. The last time I saw Soup's youngest, Aimee, she was young, very young. She was carefree.
Today Aimee is a high school student and a poet, and Soup just sent two of her newest works on to me. There is a line in one that strikes me as particularly alive and yearning and exquisite, and I hope Aimee won't mind if I share it here. Look at this. Say it out loud and listen. The words of a young soul leaned forward:
But that is beside the point right now, because Soup grew up and I moved away, and Soup's children—they grew up, too. The last time I saw Soup's youngest, Aimee, she was young, very young. She was carefree.
Today Aimee is a high school student and a poet, and Soup just sent two of her newest works on to me. There is a line in one that strikes me as particularly alive and yearning and exquisite, and I hope Aimee won't mind if I share it here. Look at this. Say it out loud and listen. The words of a young soul leaned forward:
How
can I say what I’ve lost
if you’re not
drowning yet.
— Aimee Seu
1 comments:
Ooh. Those 4 lines sent a chill through me. Sounds like Aimee is very talented.
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