An Insomniac's Writing Moment (or, excerpt from novel in progress)

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

In July the orange-pink of the gladiola crack from their husks; they split the dark. The birds fidget in the trees. The crows are disgusted. The noise of quiet places is impossible. It kept Sophie awake all that night.

7 comments:

Ed Goldberg said...

Quite beautiful and descriptive.

Maya Ganesan said...

Oooh, that's such a pretty moment.

Anonymous said...

Lovely.

Beth Fehlbaum, Author said...

I really like that line: "the noise of quiet places is impossible." What a contrast. Very striking imagery.

Priya said...

Love it (and the picture too).

Woman in a Window said...

Love, LOVE this. My favorite so far. That crows should be disgusted...ohhhhh!

Anna Lefler said...

Mmmm...

I'm right there with you in that scene...

:^) Anna

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